I was learning about how to edit boring stories and making them more rich.
I enjoyed choosing a story to edit.
I found it easy to publish it to a google slide.
I found it hard to edit my story.
Next time I will try to put in autio to my story and put more rich words in to make it sound better.
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Kia ora Ruvae great writing, I like how its detailed and next time mabye change the font colour to all black because the red words are a bit distractcing
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